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Award winning Animated short- Archive Of Infinity

wungunwungun Posts: 59
in Art Studio

I never posted this in here i used nothing but daz figures and props on this project---

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  • wsterdanwsterdan Posts: 2,348
    edited December 2015

    Excellent work, very well done. The sound volume is occasionally a little quiet and the voices sometimes sound a little garbled, but the only thing I'd strongly suggest is to change your spelling, "Theif" should be spelled "Thief".

    The animation, rendering and sound effects are excellent, better than some things I've seen on TV.

    Thanks for sharing, looking forward to more.

    -- Walt

     

    Edited for typing errors.

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  • FirstBastionFirstBastion Posts: 7,762
    edited December 2015

    Well done.  Everything from your choice of camera angles, the pacing of the editing,  the composition of shots with foreground and background action, the quality of the animations and the rendering,   all of it works very well to tell a compelling story.   You definitely put alot of work into it and it shows.  I want to know what happens next and that always a good sign.   Agreed,  in a few places the audio/dialogue is low and tough to make out. You might want to consider improving it (re-record it ?) ,  the rest of the episode is good enough to deserve the extra work.  Bring on eposode 2.  Big thumbs up!  

     

    ps. (really small point - thought the tiltes ran too long)

    Post edited by FirstBastion on
  • IvyIvy Posts: 7,165

    Very impressive fim.  ditto to all the comments up above :)

  • wungunwungun Posts: 59
    wsterdan said:

    Excellent work, very well done. The sound volume is occasionally a little quiet and the voices sometimes sound a little garbled, but the only thing I'd strongly suggest is to change your spelling, "Theif" should be spelled "Thief".

    The animation, rendering and sound effects are excellent, better than some things I've seen on TV.

    Thanks for sharing, looking forward to more.

    -- Walt

     

    Edited for typing errors.

    Thanks for the kind words i am in the process of reediting the sound and tittles and adding extra footage to the animation.

  • wungunwungun Posts: 59
    FirstBastion said:

    Well done.  Everything from your choice of camera angles, the pacing of the editing,  the composition of shots with foreground and background action, the quality of the animations and the rendering,   all of it works very well to tell a compelling story.   You definitely put alot of work into it and it shows.  I want to know what happens next and that always a good sign.   Agreed,  in a few places the audio/dialogue is low and tough to make out. You might want to consider improving it (re-record it ?) ,  the rest of the episode is good enough to deserve the extra work.  Bring on eposode 2.  Big thumbs up!  

     

    ps. (really small point - thought the tiltes ran too long)

    Thanks i am glad you liked it ! I am re editing the movie and making it longer and it will include episode 2 when it gets re released.

  • wungunwungun Posts: 59
    Ivy said:

    Very impressive fim.  ditto to all the comments up above :)

    Oh wow! Thanks Ivy i am a big fan of Karate Girl! I am glad you liked my animation thank you!

  • KA1KA1 Posts: 1,012

    Very good indeed!! Nicely animated and directed, when's the next part, I'm intrigued to learn more of the story!!

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