Golia, Goddess of War

Gemini Queen

As a goddess, she can transform into many different visages to fit her needs. She can insight anger/hatred into the heart of man, she can give the tactical prowess needed to overcome your enemy, and her gaze can instill the doom of the looming defeat. When needed, she can bring the calmig senstation of peace after a treaty has been drawn. Her power and wisdoms of the art of battle and war range far beyond any mortals imagination. Though she too once was mortal, and paid the price time and time again for her transcendant state. After going through the trials of bravery, intelligence, endurance, and will power, she will give you the opprotunity to receive divine assitance. Will you be ready to make the sacrifice and receive the ultimate push to win your war? Or will you crumble before her might and become one of the many who have fallen before and watch as the next general approches the same challenge?

Golia the Goddess of War awaits....

On a side note of seriousness, I spent a good bit of time on the lighting. That was the bane of this piece. What do you guys think? How could I improve?