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Need honest opinion

DaventakiDaventaki Posts: 1,624
in Art Studio

I need an honest opinion on her arm positions, do they look natural?

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  • PaintboxPaintbox Posts: 1,633
    edited April 2020

    No, not to me, either the arms should be more relaxed, or held up higher, near to her body. Right now it is an in between. Also the hands are a bit off, maybe because both hands seem to be dominant. So normally one hand holds it, the other should assist. 
     

    E.g. : https://thumbs.dreamstime.com/z/bride-holding-wedding-bouquet-red-roses-44356419.jpg

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  • Fae3DFae3D Posts: 2,560

    I agree.  Most of the time I see flowers held, it's low, close to the body, or high up close to or against the chest.  Looks like it will be a lovely picture, though!

  • Cris PalominoCris Palomino Posts: 11,376

    Search "woman holding bouquet side view" in google, you'll get images.

  • ChoholeChohole Posts: 33,604

    tbh  it rather looks like she thinks the bouquet stinks and she wants to get rid of it quickly.

  • SaphirewildSaphirewild Posts: 6,668

    I agree with all the advice because when I got married all those years ago I held my flowers up and to my chest!!

  • DaventakiDaventaki Posts: 1,624
    Chohole said:

    tbh  it rather looks like she thinks the bouquet stinks and she wants to get rid of it quickly.

    Lol That might just be the case!  The flower thats in it I have no idea what it is but I didn't want to buy a whole dress set for just the bouquet and I didn't find any others that I wanted to use.

    Thank you everyone for the advise.  I did look a pictures but I didn't think to type side view will give it another go today with fresh eyes and better pictures. I am terrible at making my own poses.

  • nonesuch00nonesuch00 Posts: 18,131

    No, but in the weddings during the march down the aisle they do carry them like that.

  • AscaniaAscania Posts: 1,849

    The whole posture is off with the back straight but bent forward at the hip. It looks like she's holding a sword instead of a bouquet and is preparing to lift it for an overhead strike.

  • GordigGordig Posts: 10,058

    I think it looks like decent posing if she's about to throw the bouquet.

  • DaventakiDaventaki Posts: 1,624

    Not throwing unfortunately shes walking down to her love.  Hows this one look.  Cudos to all the pose builders out there, goodness!!!

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  • Fae3DFae3D Posts: 2,560
    Daventaki said:

    Not throwing unfortunately shes walking down to her love.  Hows this one look.  Cudos to all the pose builders out there, goodness!!!

    That looks great!

  • nonesuch00nonesuch00 Posts: 18,131
    Daventaki said:

    Not throwing unfortunately shes walking down to her love.  Hows this one look.  Cudos to all the pose builders out there, goodness!!!

    Much better, but the lady in the picture is standing and if walking down the ailse she really would keep her forearms off her hips to keep from bumping the forearms with each hip pivot. 

  • ChoholeChohole Posts: 33,604
    Daventaki said:

    Not throwing unfortunately shes walking down to her love.  Hows this one look.  Cudos to all the pose builders out there, goodness!!!

    Very much better

  • PaintboxPaintbox Posts: 1,633
    nonesuch00 said:
    Daventaki said:

    Not throwing unfortunately shes walking down to her love.  Hows this one look.  Cudos to all the pose builders out there, goodness!!!

     

    Much better, but the lady in the picture is standing and if walking down the ailse she really would keep her forearms off her hips to keep from bumping the forearms with each hip pivot. 

    Also she is bending / leaning a bit forward too much, like she is going to run to the aisle. Her shoulders seems to high up as well, she should relax her shoulders a little bit (I know, marriage is stressful!)

  • DaventakiDaventaki Posts: 1,624

    Thanks everyone!

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