Trying to create a story

luismfm70_234c6479b4

Hi, i´ve started usind Daz 3 months ago and this is an amazing tool.
I´m trying to create a story, using all the tools available. So, this is work in progress.
GDN Darla is my favourite character....

FirstBastion

I like your camera angle choices.  And almost all the renders have a high quality to them,  especially the ones inside the interior of the Air-Port.  You've established a scenario,  introduced interesting characters,  suggested a potential villian, hinted at certain capabilities,   and made us just curious enough to learn what happens next.   If you post more page,  I'd keep reading. 

 

just minor constructive notes:  The one weak panel was the exterior New Earth establishing shots,  it just looked like models against the terradome,  whereas all the other panels had a higher production value. 

Novica

I loved the kid on the dad's shoulders, fun posing in that one!

 

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Very nice! How do you add text captions? I assume it's done outside of DAZ.