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chris_settlemoirchris_settlemoir Posts: 362
edited August 2016 in Art Studio

 any ones 2 cents

http://www.daz3d.com/forums/uploads/FileUpload/40/0db9f6c8273eb00ecf0689b99d4784.jpg

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  • KnittingmommyKnittingmommy Posts: 8,191

    The picture won't show like that in the forums.  Try to open up the Picture box and put that link in the Picture box.  Don't forget to set the width to 800 or less.

  • chris_settlemoirchris_settlemoir Posts: 362

    bout to fix that right now just noticed it

  • chris_settlemoirchris_settlemoir Posts: 362
    edited August 2016

    heres another

     

    office 5 ppl.jpg
    2560 x 1440 - 3M
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  • chris_settlemoirchris_settlemoir Posts: 362
    edited August 2016

    ah will fix this one

     

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  • SaphirewildSaphirewild Posts: 6,668

    do you see a box at the bottom of message box called "ATTACH A FILE"?

    That is how you put in pictures to show off :D

    I hope that helps.

  • IceDragonArtIceDragonArt Posts: 12,548

    Great posing and nicely put together.  You could probably lower her hand a bit to have it connect to her leg or knee.   If you rotate the camera a bit in scene you can see from a different angle to help position things accurately (I still do this, all the time, and have to reming myself to look at it from a couple different angles to make sure its right)

  • 3Diva3Diva Posts: 11,527

    None of the images are showing up for me. 

  • KnittingmommyKnittingmommy Posts: 8,191

    I don't see any images either, just broken image icons.

  • Richard HaseltineRichard Haseltine Posts: 100,948
    edited August 2016

    Do not delete the attachment after adding a link to the body of the post - the attachment must be there for the link to point to. You won't see the issue as you will still be getting the cached copy, as will anyone who opened the thread before you deleted the attachment.

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  • chris_settlemoirchris_settlemoir Posts: 362

    ok ill fix that thankie

  • chris_settlemoirchris_settlemoir Posts: 362
    edited August 2016

    another

    laundry.jpg
    1300 x 1000 - 972K
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  • chris_settlemoirchris_settlemoir Posts: 362
    edited August 2016

    another

    fina caffe render .jpg
    1920 x 1080 - 1M
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  • SaphirewildSaphirewild Posts: 6,668

    Ok now that I can see the images I have a few things to talk about: 1. First image is good but you need to work on the lighting. 2. Second image the lady sitting in the corner has a major poke through on her skirt . 3. The third image has a really big problem in it and it is the fact that the skirt did not move with the pose you used and her legs are showing threw. 4. The forth image is really good buttttt.......the lighting on that needs to be fixed maybe amp up the intensity of the ligting if your using 3Delight in Daz.

  • isidornisidorn Posts: 1,601

    In addition to what Saphirewild said, I'd like to add that in the office picture it makes no sense composition wise to cramp all characters together like that, making two of them hidden behind others, when there's so much empty space in the image, especially to the right side. My suggestion would be to either crop the image or spread the characters out.

    In the second image the red woman seems to have nipples poke through, even if it's just a little. That's a sure way to get an image deleted.

    I like the last one, but as Saphirewild said, the lights need to be worked on. I'm also not sure about those clouds in the background. Can't put my finger on it really, but they look strange somehow.

    Lastly, in general, your positioning and posing needs closer attention. Most of the characters have a bit of space between them and the surfaces they are supposed to sit on or be touching.

    All in all, it's a good start on all them, but they all need more work.

  • Cris PalominoCris Palomino Posts: 11,378
    edited August 2016

    I fixed the images that had attachments; it does not appear that you used the url of the attachment.  There was no attachment on the first one, so couldn't do anything there.  If you reupload the first one as an attachment, you should be able to fix it.

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  • XaatXuunXaatXuun Posts: 873

    the office, first thing I thought, Body language, Some tweaking  and it'll bring some life to the scene

    did a google for some help of bodylanguage

  • chris_settlemoirchris_settlemoir Posts: 362

    ah i apolgose im still not use to fixing th cloths im afraid of making them going all wonky whats the best way to adjust them

  • chris_settlemoirchris_settlemoir Posts: 362

    and ill fix the body langage and lighting

  • IceDragonArtIceDragonArt Posts: 12,548

    No worries we all started right where you are now.  Its a lot of trial and error and practice.  You will get the hang of it!

  • IceDragonArtIceDragonArt Posts: 12,548

    Come over to the newbie contest thread and join in.  You will learn a TON of stuff in a very short period of time.Even just reading through the prior ones will shorten the learning curve.

    http://www.daz3d.com/forums/discussion/103831/aug-2016-new-user-contest-general-render-wip-thread#latest

  • SaphirewildSaphirewild Posts: 6,668

    Yes I agree with Sonja you should come over to the newbie challenge it will help you a great deal, I know it has with my renders for sure.

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